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Stephen B. Anthony's avatar

I like some of your phrasing quite well. "She simply wanted a candy apple" gave me a sense of nostalgia. And I loved how Serafin calls the queen Little One. Makes me want to know their history.

Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing!

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Tara Deacon's avatar

I found it to be an interesting read from start to finish!! You asked the writer definitely left me wanting to know more of their story!! This could truly easily become a series!! Thanks for three share!! I subscribed because I truly enjoyed my read and I can't wait to read more of what you wrote! 💓💓💓

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