I finally took the time to read this and I was in awe. My eyes started sweating from the very beginning by the way [that's just me] but thank u for the happy ending. The suspense was very teasing and I liked it!! will read more of ur pieces soon
I was engrossed in this from beginning to end! The way you portray the doing of loss and love is exhilarating. Have you heard the myth about magpie bridge? I reference it often in poetry bc of the love and loss symbolism, and i thin you did the most beautiful job using the bridge as a portal.
there’s a kind of sadness here that feels almost holy like you’re mourning not just a person, but the way time itself refuses to stay still. every line clung to memory the way hands cling to something already slipping away. it stayed with me OMG I LOVE THIS
This was such a beautiful and tragic love story. I desperately wanted it to work out for them every step of the way. You painted such a vivid image of the bridge and of Elysia's character. I really enjoyed it!
Okay, finally got around to reading this, and I love the concept 🤩 extremely cool idea! Well done!
I finally took the time to read this and I was in awe. My eyes started sweating from the very beginning by the way [that's just me] but thank u for the happy ending. The suspense was very teasing and I liked it!! will read more of ur pieces soon
Aw thank you so much for the kind words! Ty for taking the time to read it <3
Absolutely lovely to read. Well done
This confused me. I enjoy it, but i do not understand it
What a sweet story! I loved the mystery and suspense.
Enjoyed this love story and its twists. Believed in its emotions.
This is beautiful ❤️ and also covers a topic I am growing to love. The crossing of timelines
I was engrossed in this from beginning to end! The way you portray the doing of loss and love is exhilarating. Have you heard the myth about magpie bridge? I reference it often in poetry bc of the love and loss symbolism, and i thin you did the most beautiful job using the bridge as a portal.
I haven't heard of the magpie bridge I'll have to look into it! Thank you btw
there’s a kind of sadness here that feels almost holy like you’re mourning not just a person, but the way time itself refuses to stay still. every line clung to memory the way hands cling to something already slipping away. it stayed with me OMG I LOVE THIS
Omg thank you! You described my story in such a beautiful way, thank you!
This redefines poetry itself. I was immersed in your story and the delicate adjectives you use to describe her are like a melody.
I want a love that makes me feel alive like this. Thank you for opening my eyes and reminding me what it feels like.
Keep writing. Your words nourish the soul.
Thank you so much, your words mean so much to me.
I’m so glad!! I loved reading your story!
This was such a beautiful and tragic love story. I desperately wanted it to work out for them every step of the way. You painted such a vivid image of the bridge and of Elysia's character. I really enjoyed it!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!