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Artemis's avatar

I'm sorry I just got to this now! What a beginning to a story. The protagonist is immediately sympathetic, and I'm so intrigued by the hints of the world. I can't wait to keep reading <3

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The Bathrobe Guy (Robes) ๐Ÿ‘˜'s avatar

This opening moves like dream-smoke, soft, uncanny, and full of that quiet ache that fantasy at its best can carry.

I felt the chill of the trees and the weight of the unseen. Thereโ€™s myth in this world, but itโ€™s not shouting, itโ€™s waiting. Watching. Beautiful writing. Iโ€™ll be walking with this one.

Stay entangled, my friend.

โ€”The Bathrobe Guy

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Mew Clawfur's avatar

Protagonist is so trans girl coded if not trans canonically

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